I AM
I am a dreamer and a fighter
I wonder were am going to be in the next 2o yrs
I hear hand clapping
I see people clapping
I want to be happy
I am a dreamer and a fighter
I pretend I am in the sky
I feel like I was flying
I touch the clouds
I worry that I am going to fall
I cry if I don't achieve my goals
I am a dreamer and a fighter
I understand I cant fly
I say we should all aim for the sky
I dream about being successful
I try not to fail
I hope ill be complete
I am a dreamer and a fighter
5 comments:
I think your poem was not well put, it seemed rushed and i see pizza grease on it. I think next time you should take you time and use your mind to express yourself not your hands. Don't take this as an insult, but constructive criticism.
I think your poem is nice and i think that with your attitude you could achieve all your dreams and goals....
Good luck*
well if your a fighter keep on fighting..u will achieve everything u dream of.....meowwwwww
nice poem everyone needs to fight for there dream some things don't come easy. ( for some people) lol
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